Crimson Rain

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   May 31, 2005


Springtime rain is fallin'
The sky remains so blue
Springtime rain is fallin'
Reminding me of you

Springtime rain is fallin'
My tears they are the rain
Springtime rain is fallin'
Because of all my pain

Beautiful creeks are flowing
To the salty ocean blue
They flow with salty tears
I've shed because of you

Beautiful creeks flood'th over
With my salty tears and blood
Beautiful creeks flood'th over
Then the sky shall soak them up

Then one day the springtime rain
Shall turn a crimson red
Crimson rain from all my pain
From the blood and tears I've shed

I'll dance out in the crimson rain
My pain shall slowly seep
As I lay to rest in the crimson rain
No longer shall I weep

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 19 years ago

    by William Flores

    another great poem! you are a very creative writer. keep them coming and thanx again for all the comments!

  • 19 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Whoa... really heavy.. but i love it... seriously... its awsum... keep up da gud work XD

    Luv alwayz... *..KimiC..* XOXOX

  • 19 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    This was a mediocre, I found some parts were well done, while other's were just a hit or miss. But good write I gave it three.

  • 19 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    yay! very nice. this was amazing. i like it alot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ghosty

    That is an awesome poem. I loved it. Good job.

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