by Kaitlin Kristina May 31, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
She’s like a crystal, |
Wonderful job Kaitlin!!! |
my writing are way out of your league.. i really love this poem ^_^ |
by Bret Higgins
Nice use of comparison and depth of meaning. |
by Carmen
wow..that was so deep |
by Kevin
Nice one sweety....solid topic, classic angle but never too cliche to get boring. I think that the last line of each stanze, with the exception of the first one, has one too many syllables. |