very beautifully written, I loved it, and I did get it. Its amazing how you just let the words tell the story of how someone is so afraid of being loved......great job Love ya Becky

i luv ur writting and sum how it inspires me ai! u use hell good words and it flows so good

This was a wonderful poem. I love how you referred to this girl as a crystal trying to avoid getting cracks. Very nice. I loved the images you evoked here. Great job, Kaitlin.

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5

Nice one sweety....solid topic, classic angle but never too cliche to get boring. I think that the last line of each stanze, with the exception of the first one, has one too many syllables.

Nice pic on your profile...you look kinda confused...like you're staring at traffic trying to find the quantum strings.

wow..that was so deep

Nice use of comparison and depth of meaning.

Not an uncommon comparison, but tastefully done to elevate it to another level.

If this was a curveball it would have 'great stuff'.

B

my writing are way out of your league.. i really love this poem ^_^

Wonderful job Kaitlin!!!