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by Elissa May 31, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Deep in your mind Where there is no light Hides the monster You can not fight Made of everything you hate And all thats gone wrong You can not win Because it is to strong It causes chaos Total confusion it does raise Makes you unable to think And sets your thoughts ablaze It brings out your anguish Makes depression a place to dwell And how you really feel No one can tell Your eyes are so bright And your smile so real They don't see your wounds That never seem to heal They don't get it What you need is a friend But everyone you know Goes away in the end No on understands They don't see what you hide You know there is no point in life When your already dead inside But still you go on in life Forcing yourself through each day Your eternally in the shadows And there you will forever stay-Might not make much sense, but please vote and comment I would really appreciate it-
by lee
Yea, it made plenty of sense to me. 5/5
by Timothy B
Made plenty of sence actually. Good writing. Keep it up Tim
by Harlequin[let me put you to sleep]
yay, another great poem by none other than elissa, yay, *loud applauses* lol harley