i can so relate to that !!!! its so amazing!!!

great poem.

hey thanks for cheackin out my poem and coomenting on it i love the poem alot i give it a five lol

wow...great poem...I totally understand this...thank you very much for the comment
take care,
Renee

your poem is so amazing. ive been writing a while now but none are as good as that! i can relate too- really i can. thaks for helping me stop and think about things . stay smiling, sam

I really like this. I have a poem called 'bleeding for you' too, very ironic. I really like this part:

Bleeding out the memories
Bleeding out the lies
Bleeding out the feeling,

It kind of wraps up the feelings of being set free from whatever pain is inside, with cutting. Once again this is a really good poem. Keep it up

Great poem, you truly are talented! Hang in there and take care!
Car

Great job.

I really like this poem! good job

Amazing poem! I can relate so much! You have excellent talent! Keep it up!

sorry if you need someone to talk to you can comment on one of my poems and i can send you a private message. just remember you don't have to cut yourself you just have to let your feelings come out by talking

just comment if you want to talk

I wrote this when I was cutting, but I'm happy to say that I don't cut anymore.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ure poems relate to me sooo so so soooooooooooooooo much omg i love ure poems lol i read all of them!

Really good read. It sounds like some of my stuff. You should check out "Her Last Kiss" I think you'll find it along the same lines just at a dferent perpective.

very well written your a truly gifted poet and your only 13. What are they teaching kids in school now a days that make them that intellingent. Keep it up and I'll keep postins. Thanks for the read and the critique. rbmo401

I was just reading all these comments and I see that all of you like it lol. THanks for taking the time to read this, you all are amazing and talented writers!

Much love
Rachel

That was great! Very deep!Keep writting love your work!

loved this poem!good job!*hugs*
xoxo
<3Jess

awesome job i esp liked
"You don't know all the pain that's locked deep inside.
Or how many tears my heart has cried."
5/5

it's seriously great man...keep up your talent