The End Of Life

by ღ Christina ღ   May 31, 2005


~~I wrote this poem when I came home from school. I was thinking about it for a while and decided to write my feelings about this down. I didn't even realize it was a poem until I read it over again~~

Sometimes I think to myself
About the end of my life
When death comes
And the end to all my strife

I feel like I will be a kid forever
And that I will never get old
But I know it will be time
Because that’s what I’ve been told

My Life will go like a blink
When I'm about to die
Remembering all my memories
At the corner of my eye

I start to think
How my life will be
I want it to be a surprise
Just to wait and see

I’ve been told of another life
Life after death
Starting a new one
Right after my last breath

That is why I’m not scared to die
But I wont take the chance
Because there is so much to experience
Like friendships and romance

The End of Life
Is really far from now
So shouldn't I enjoy it?
The only question is “how”

~~I know its really bad and I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this but I would really appreciate any comments~~

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    When I started I belittled my work as well. And I learned (and told by many) to stop doing that...calling my poems lame or whatever...you have to learn to not do that too. You have a lot of courage posting your feeling/thoughts for people to read...forget about people's opinions. Write truthfully and it will come out fine. You're talented; stop calling your work bad.

    Great poem. I especially love the last stanza - good question!

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow that left me thinking. I love poems like this, great eye opener...It had a very powerful meaning.

  • 19 years ago

    by Haleigh

    this poem shows great potential...

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    absolutely excellent 5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Full of great meaning. Makes the reader think! It's not really bad at all. You do have a long life ahead of you and believe me you'll have some surprises along the way. I always wonder about life after death we all find out one day! Great poem! Take Care! Brooke~

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