I thought it was awesome and I could relate to it! You did a great job with the rhyming too. Good job!

it was a really good. i could definetely relate to it. i knoe wat its like to loose friends...especially when u thought that it would last forever...but i guess we have to move on. i just wish i dnt loose the friends i have now and im sure u'll make new friends if u didn't already. anyway great poem

it was a really good. i could definetely relate to it. i knoe wat its like to loose friends...especially when u thought that it would last forever...but i guess we have to move on. i just wish i dnt loose the friends i have now and im sure u'll make new friends if u didn't already. anyway great poem

Wow, I really liked your poem. It describes what I'm going through with my friendz. I luv this poem it is so true. I gave it a 5! Keep up the great work! Peaze, keep your head up!

Hey, that was amazing! i know wut you mean...wow..you worded that perfectly!! definetely a 5!! Keep it up and take care...i hope thingz are alrite..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

that was really good. it almost made me cry

hey,
thats a great poem. :D
5/5
keep it up
- xXlostXx

So I know you have heard this a millon times but your poem was awesome I really liked it! xoxoxo
-michelle ann

its such a good poem, and on top of it, there has to be people that relate there is 2 girls on my street, and there my sister and i...i think they forgot what we use to have..i might send that to her....i like it. she deserves to know!

Wow.. Amazing.. 5/5
*~*Casey*~*

wow. this poem really touched me. i know what that feels like. you chose great words.

oh wow! i have no words to say about this poem... i love it! i felt the SAME way when my friendship with my so called best friend broke apart! i have a poem about if you would like to read it.. 'I Just Dont Understand' well that was a very good poem 5/5 and keep up the great work and hope everything is alright now! im here if you ever wanna talk! God Bless
<3
Sami

I think you were that close shattered, I also believe people grow apart. It doesn't make either of you less decent people, less intimate friendship nor does it mean your love for each other meant any less. Its just a natural part of life, that we grow and take different paths from those we were once close to at a stage. I'm sure you learnt alot from your girlfriends as they did from you, and I hope the memories of your friendship and wonderful times spent together aren't clouded by the fact that you no longer are :o) Stay smiling sweety...Eirisa

Awesome, really good poem! 5/5

omg that was great, when i was reading it i thought of my 3 old best friends amanda patty and celine right away, i cant tell you how much i can relate becuase i just found an old picture a few weeks ago....i LOVED the poem is was amazing...keep up the great work...i love your poems...i gave it a 5