THE SOLDIERS

by marilyn marti   Oct 9, 2003


Blood shed
mind obsessed
soldiers dead

Heart stopped
face bloodshot
inside, all lost

Loss of friends
mixed up within
it's too hard to live

Thoughts confusing
it's never amusing
hard time choosing

Alone and scared
no one out there
faceless stares

Trying to survive
cold lost nights
can't get by
the thought of dying

All tears cried
too many lives
whose time was taken

The ones who deserve respect
The ones whose blood was bled
The ones who were sacrificed and endured those countless scary nights
Our true friends
the brave ones
the soldiers.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Very well written its nice to see some one with genuin graditude great great

  • 20 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Well my dear you should be very very proud of this....It is excellent...Great job....I'll give it a 5..........take care