Aww, so very sad, but beautifully penned indeed. My best wishes are sent out to Steph as well. keep up the good work 5 |
by Just Lucy
aaaww... thats so sad :( |
by Brookeღ
I hope she will be okay. I can feel your love and pain. A lot of your poems are about your loss it's so sad I know how it feels to lose a loved one but I haven't lost one to suicide. Take Care of her and yourself! You express your true feelings very well! ~Brooke~ |
Such a sad poem, but full of emotion. I can tell you wrote this from the heart. I hope your friend will be ok. Stay strong. |
by Hayley Marie
nice poem!!! stephanie needs your help! she needs to know your there. hope shes ok soon! |
by Jordan
Omg. I have chills running up both arms, and everything. I am so sorry for whats happening. I know that it doesn't mean much coming from someone that you don't know. But I wish you and Stephanie the best. And I hope that she knows how many people truly care. |
by Corrie
awww! so sad, but it was great! very well written! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie |
by otto
amazed at the way you write, at the way you capture what you want to say, this poem makes one go through what your going through-that's awsome |
by ~*Ley*~
wow this was amazing. and excellent tribute and plea for a friend. but one thing...you say that the knife is all you have maybe she feels the same way and therefore how can you expect her to stop if you yourself are not willing to. |
by Elissa
Omg tina this was really goodm your such and awesome writer, you really good at putting what you feel into poetry, 5/5 on this poem |
by Tammy
Tina this poem gave me goosebumps. It was very good. My prayers are with you and your friend. You two need to help each other through this. Suicide is not the answer, neither is cutting. It only creates more problems. I understand you girls must have a lot of pain to deal with, but I've been there, I tried to commit suicide when I was a teen. I thought things couldn't get any worse. Thank God my friend , by the grace of God, knew what I had done and stayed with me and helped me. I think now, instead of thinking that things can't get any worse, I should have been thinking how much better things could (and will) get. I am 39 now and I have a wonderful husband, 5 beautiful children ages 12, 13, 14, 15 & 21. I love God with everything within me and I wouldn't change a thing that happened in my life. All that I lived through has made me the person that I am now. I know God has a plan for you, don't let the devil win this one girl! You have people that love you that you aren't even aware of. Try to look at the future, if things are bad at home, draw close to Jesus and pray for a change. You only have a few years to deal with whatever is going on. YOU CAN MAKE IT THROUGH!! Then you will have your own life, your own home, a home you can fill with love instead of sadness. |
by Denise
Every poem i read by you touches my heart, i relate to every single one. |
I want to say first off great poem and i'm sorry for your lost. I have a brother who lost a good friend from suicide but i never ever had to witness it but i set myself up for it cause i used to cut and my arms are all ugly and everything. I didn't follow anyone but i know that if i did, I wouldn't follow someone who self harms cause i already know how it is, but if i didn't i'd probably think it was cool but it's not and you dont only hurt yourself from it you hurt everyone around you cause like your best friends sister, she followed you cause she looked up to you and i believe your a good person and thats why she looks up to you. I love your peom and it really touched me in my mind, body, and soul and i know that i'm glade i'm still alive cause i wouldn't want someone i love to hurt themselves or feel as if it was their fault i was gone when i made that decision on my own even though i mit not be all there if i did commite suicide but i know its wrong and i know cutting is wrong though its good to ease my pain but you dont go for what feels good you go with what is right. |
by Sarah
this is a great poem...im so sorry about ur sisters...i hope they stop hurting themselves...i cut too and it sux!....im sorry...! |
by Silence
THAT IS JUST SOO SAD. But you are soo talented. Good luck to Stephanie. |
Very touching! I wish you and Stephanie the best! |
this is such an unbelievable poem and it had so much emotion in it, it sent chills down my spine |
by Denise
Tina, your poem always make me cry, they describe so many things i also feel. My bestfriend also committed suicide. Hang in there, You got alot going for you. Give my best to Stephanie, and good luck, You're my favorite author. |
by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××
when i read your poems i can feel your pain. i wish things werent like this for you and i hope that as well as stephanie getting better you do too... |
by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××
hey this is ab on my friends account. oh my gosh your poems are really good!!! they are so touching and so sad. i hope that things can get better. take care. |