I'm Just Barely Holding On

Oh well tha's sad. but i really liked that line that said that you suffer from all your memories and that you cant move on from your past. cuz neither can I, and I thought i was crazy or something, and its cool to know that...its not just me..anyways, 5/5

WOW that was beautiful! such a good poem, sad but well written. And im also sorry about how things are going right now i hope they get better
Love always,
Elissa

I think it's beautiful the way you can fit your feelings into words that make everyone feel the pain you hold in side. 5/5 i say. Luvyalotz!
~Lindsey

excellent you've captured pplz true feelings and displayed them expertly. you are very taltented. i hope you are alright though. hold on and stay for those around you or you might leave others the same way danielle left you, feeling completely helpless and unhappy
~Freak~

great poem, liked everything about it, the way the worda formed to the way you painted the picture for reader to see and go through those emotions going on