this is a well written dark poem full of honest emotion

wow that was so great!!!!
loved this a lot.
very well written and put together!!!
much love S@R@H

5/5

Very well expressed dark poem! The flow was perfect. I am sorry about your life right now I hope things will look up for you! Again well done! Take Care! Brooke~

Another amazing poem. You have a beautiful talent. Stay strong.
Take care always,
- Shell.

OMG this is so good 5/5 keep ur chin up alright i know how u feel keepwriting luv rach

well written xx

this is an excellent write. And I disagree with jesi. You don't have to be able to relate to realize what a profound poem this is. 5/5 in my book!
Luv always, KT

i dont relate completely to it but i still think that it is an amazing poem! you've got real talent there, keep at it

XsaraX

wow, very powerful.. great job! *KISSES*~Corrie

great poem, liked everything about it, the way the worda formed to the way you painted the picture for reader to see and go through those emotions going on

excellent you've captured pplz true feelings and displayed them expertly. you are very taltented. i hope you are alright though. hold on and stay for those around you or you might leave others the same way danielle left you, feeling completely helpless and unhappy
~Freak~

I think it's beautiful the way you can fit your feelings into words that make everyone feel the pain you hold in side. 5/5 i say. Luvyalotz!
~Lindsey

WOW that was beautiful! such a good poem, sad but well written. And im also sorry about how things are going right now i hope they get better
Love always,
Elissa

Oh well tha's sad. but i really liked that line that said that you suffer from all your memories and that you cant move on from your past. cuz neither can I, and I thought i was crazy or something, and its cool to know that...its not just me..anyways, 5/5