Very clever indeed, and maybe if i'm honest, a little scary ;o) but not as scary as the music on your website, made me jump! wasnt expecting music. haha. (5)

Interesting piece. Not your best, but I love the idea behind it. Thank you so much for all the comments you write to my poems. They are really greatly appreciated. Great job on this piece. I am gonna read the other one you wrote today. Tata

Eden

haha, I guess I do write a lot...but I'm all alone in the house and I get so freakin bored. haha, anywho. Thanks once again for the comments. I'm gonna go read some of my book now;) tata

Eden

This was defantly a different poem it made you think. That good. All and all a good read.If you get time please look over any of my poems I would be greatful...

Hey, rather interesting and well written.One critisism...is slayered a word?

anyhow. its a great poem so well done!

jemma

ok i take it back slayered is a real word - sorry about that - i've never heard it before

Heather, Makes you think for sure. But once again another great piece. hugs, love, Ann

Interesting....I found it mysterious and intriguing! Overall, not your best but still great! Love ya~Holly

heather, that's great...how do you come up with all these ideas?! it's amazing!! well thank you for always commenting on my poems, means the world to me =)...love you lots, take care *hugs* ....great poem by the way, as always ;)

-brittnay- ((5/5))

You did an amazing job on this poem. Quite interesting I might add! Very well done I ejoyed reading it! Take Care! Brooke~

wow i really liked the poem it was great keep writing i look forward to it
take care
HS

Interesting, quite frightening, I enjoyed it, well done xx

great poem! i love it! very dark and spiritual.. keep it up!

Love, Taylor