24 days

by Amanda   Jun 1, 2005


I'm coming from here to the other side,
I really can't wait, with you i don't hide,
You share everything and I also do too,
I would go into space just to be with you,

Having fun with our endless conversations,
talking all night, moaning about our relations,
Food tasting and watching films late at night,
the scariest stuff, always jumping in fright,

Going on shopping trips, arguing and fighting,
sat on the floor, in our books we are writing,
Making little things for our memories folder,
to remember it all for when we get older,

With a smile on my face i jump in the air,
only 24 more days and i will be there,
Going to give hugs because you are great,
and I missed you, my very best mate.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

Just getting a little excited that i am going to see Jade at the end of the month because the last 8 months without her seems like forever. Not bothered that it's rubbish, just needed to get it out before i exploded! Lol! Please read though - thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by cac123

    this is such a wonderful happy poem,i really enjoyed it, it made me smile.

    5/5
    always,
    cate

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    it kept my attention, good!

  • 19 years ago

    by LindaPham

    thanx for commenting on my poem and sorry it took so long for me to comment back

  • 19 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Really like this one. The rhyming flows well to.

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    I loved your poem, it was so good, two reasons why, 1. it was straight from the heart, and 2. you made your reader understand what all the excitement was about. I read somewhere on one of your comments that you loved dedications, and this was just a lovely dedication to a wonderful friend.....great job, most of my poems are dedications also, if you have some time please read them, and tell me what you think. I would love it. thanks great job, hope to read one soon about fianlly getting to see jade...love ya Becky