Aww, Amanda, very cute, not at all rubbish. I think it truly shows how much you care about Jade. Keep up the great work.

Love, HMC

i agree with Heather. It shows how much you care for her. Have a nice time :)
Hayley-Ree xxx
check mine out some time xx

Beautifully done, not rubbish at all. I hope you and Jade have a wonderful time and I know you both miss each other terribly. love, Ann

I am so happy for you. You will have a lot to catch up on. It's a great idea to make memory books. When you get older it means so much to take a look back in time. It's just to bad we can't go back to those happy times. I could feel you excitement as I read this poem! I will be gone for a week I am leaving on the 4th so if you wonder why I haven't commented that will be why. I am going to Jamaica for vacation. Take Care! Brooke~

This was a good poem the flow was abit off in the 2nd paragraph but it was a good read hope you enjoy your time together...

thats good cute..x)

Not rubbish at all, It was really full of feeling which moved it along well, good work from you, keep it up

take care

The day is near and soon you'll be with Jade, I'm so happy that it all worked out for you hun....Very emotional poem, great one too..

Love sabrina*

I loved your poem, it was so good, two reasons why, 1. it was straight from the heart, and 2. you made your reader understand what all the excitement was about. I read somewhere on one of your comments that you loved dedications, and this was just a lovely dedication to a wonderful friend.....great job, most of my poems are dedications also, if you have some time please read them, and tell me what you think. I would love it. thanks great job, hope to read one soon about fianlly getting to see jade...love ya Becky

Really like this one. The rhyming flows well to.

thanx for commenting on my poem and sorry it took so long for me to comment back

it kept my attention, good!

this is such a wonderful happy poem,i really enjoyed it, it made me smile.

5/5
always,
cate