I like the way it paints that raw image of the girl. You use so many beautiful words to explain her story! AND THEY MAKE SENSE!!! Cuz u know, some people use words and don't even know what they mean.:D Hey I'm glad I am one of your friends here @ this website. YOU 1 OF MAH FRIENS 2!!! Hahaha I'll catch ya l8r, Kal. PeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeACeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee //Ari\\ 5/5

Wow, that was very beautifully written, so many perfect words...I love it!!! You have a special talent, keep writing, cause I love reading your poems.

*Much love Sabrina*

:( i'm a runaway.....but as far as i know i'm not a w.h.o.r.e. but i liked your poem alot. its very good.

excellent work for a boring day in english class. i love it all!!:D
~Freak~

this poem is awesome!
"She's a bleeding portrait,
A canvas covered in sin,
Tried to prove her innocence,
But the battle she won't win."
such a cool way to to say that. wonderful job with the poem, i love it.

take care

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Fantastic poem, just got back from holiday and its brilliant to be able to read poetry again, the second and the last stanzas in particular stood out to me, the whole poem was wonderful

well done

It's crazy, but that's why it's so cool. You really put some images that just pop! I write random poems all the time in class, so I know where this is coming from. 5/5
Luv always, KT

The rhythm was perfect. I think its really creative and I love the metaphors. Keep up the amazing work 5/5

Love,
Heather.

wow....this is amazing and unique. i love it. great poem!!

love and hugs

hey, just checkin up, haven't seen a new poem from you in a while and havn't read ne thing since this poem. hope eveythings going good, i know that things were tough for a while there. just wanted to let you know i'm here for you! and care for you! just up date me with on of how you've been!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Love it Keep writing!

wow, this is amazing i love the picture it gave me in my head, you are truely amazing.
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