Great job! I really love your poem. Keep writing, you have some talent. Take care.

hey! i dont think u need to improve!! this is a really good poem, full of emotion i love it alot! keep up the good work k xxx

wow! awesome poem.5/5

Hey great , meaningful poem, keep up the good work 5/5 frm me, oh and thanx for commentin on my poem =)

rach
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