this is a great poem!i really liked it a lot!good job!thanks for commenting on mine!*hugs*
xoxo
<3Jess

really good poem........5-5

OMGosh i love it ..great writing skills.. keep it up.

i ykd this one, too.. its really touching.. i loved ur rhyme..
keep up the talent
nouna

awww.
loved it another great poem. im glad you have a friend like that..

JAcs
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See, as i commented in your other poem; all these ideas are basically ones i've seen one way or the other throughout reading poems.. neither of your poems ive read are bad by any stretch of the word, but theyre kinda "run of the mill" i do believe the feelings were special and very unique to you, yourself, but your conveyance wasnt so much. it seemed like each previous rhyme directed where the next line would go, idea-wise. try writing a poem that doesnt rhyme and see how that works out.. good job th0.. it did have genuine sentiment..

All I can say is I really liked this poem. I think you've done a good job!

Wow. terrific poem. this is exactly how i feel about my guy friend from camp. he makes me laugh and i dont know what i would do without him. i know if we lived near eachother we'd always be together. you did a terrific job keep up the good work!!!!

A very sentimental poem. Sounds like a beautiful friendship...provoked a nostalgic feeling...it rawked...

[lostlaureate - come find me

Awww...sweet poem..a 5/5 for me =)