by Lyla Jun 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I can no longer live this life |
This poem was amazing...i really did like it. You are talented... keep up the good work |
by Rolo
Strong portrayal of emotion. Nicely done, keep it up. 5/5 |
by Lil Luce
powerful poem, and much more emotion invloved! :) sad and nicely written |
by ASPHYXIATED
another good poem the rhyming pattern may need a little work to help it flow but good x) |
by Darien
another sad poem .. but well written.. |