Holy ... that is soooo good... I love how you compare a flow of blood to a "red river" omg <3 it's awesome

-AynJal

another sad poem .. but well written..
i like your stuff :) keep up the good work!.. im gonna add u 2 my favourites

another good poem the rhyming pattern may need a little work to help it flow but good x)

powerful poem, and much more emotion invloved! :) sad and nicely written
take care
xxxLoUxxx

Strong portrayal of emotion. Nicely done, keep it up. 5/5

This poem was amazing...i really did like it. You are talented... keep up the good work

Ttyl
Maddy