Night at Sea

by EpithetPoet   Jun 2, 2005


You took my breath away
And held it in your hand
Then prayed the gods to aid you
Fabricate a pedestal to stand

Lift you high above the clouds
Lift you high above the sea
Then you dove right off
Bringing you closer to me

And in my hands i held you
Just to feel your warm embrace
Let our views and visions blur
Liquidating every thought and disgrace

With your touch i shiver
My one and only love
Before our hands parted
And you soared again above

And when i wake up crying
To find no one to comfort me
I lay back quietly and reminisce
About our one night at the sea

*no idea why i'm writing love poems lately*

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  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    this is great, you have a skill for both love, and sad poems.
    Love you..
    Samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    *Smiles*

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Quite the strong love poem writer my friend :)
    Though i wish the character wasn't missing her love :D <3

    LoveView always hun,
    ^Kal.