Bravo! Bravo! This peom was truely amazing, I liked the way the whole thing was like an anology and some of the questioning in the poem made it more than what it already was. a truely fantastic job!

thought provoking & creative. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5

Love it!

Great job, i luv it! keep up the good work!
frog 28

I hated it get a clue

lol, Tabitha...what is wrong with you? You only have a hatred it for it because you fail to understand it muh dear. Michael is a very talented writer and your level of respect has been shot obviously......
i mean, heres your poem...
I see you walk down the hall with the rest of your group
I lose my breathe thought we are friends there is something
More there I can feel it but i cant tell you and I don't know
Why. If I could have one wish it would be we could be
Together forever*********

Thou shall rest the case.

Michael, keep on writing!

Amazing poem! I especially loved the line:

"We can measure our time with clocks"

Very interesting and as Heather said, thought provoking! Take care~Holly

As said before, very thought-provoking. I haven't been on here in a while. Great job...I truly enjoyed reading it.

God Bless