Amazing poem! At first I was thinking how sweet and as I read on I was thinking how sad. Beautifully written! Full of emotion! Take Care! Brooke~

This was a refreshing read! The use of many descritive words allowed me to build a vivid picture whilst I read them.

Keep Writing
Nici

Your right, I'll change it :)

wOw..GreAt poem..MwAz LuV it!! StePHy :)

that was full of emotion...so much that i visualized everything in my head. another very well written poem. take care xxx