by Janine Jun 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Deeper and deeper |
'Tis a very nice work of art, I did enjoy it. |
i like the poem. it's good w/a nice flow....but may i suggest a spell check? it's better when there's no distraction from the actual piece of art..what the words are actually saying. |
by cooldude900
i think its very deeeeeeeeeep |
by Janine
hey can u please comment...this isn't realli the kinda poem i would write but hey just tell me what ya think |