hey can u please comment...this isn't realli the kinda poem i would write but hey just tell me what ya think
love janine

i think its very deeeeeeeeeep
raaaaaaaawwwr
james

i like the poem. it's good w/a nice flow....but may i suggest a spell check? it's better when there's no distraction from the actual piece of art..what the words are actually saying.

'Tis a very nice work of art, I did enjoy it.