Comments : Moving On

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    But when we spoke about it,
    You said there was no chance of 'us',
    I guess I should have known,
    It was only him in lust,
    I like this part. The words flow nicely. Great poem. Keep it up.~Red

  • 19 years ago

    by mike

    nice one

  • 19 years ago

    by Lemma

    omg this poem is really sad. I really like the last verse. Keep writin.

    Em xx