Love
by katie Jun 2, 2005
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Love so appealing to the heart is pure hatred when fallen apart the eyes droop with the sadness with tears inching down the face nothing but pain covered with discrace wasnt i up to his expectations well he made me hate love he made me never want to love again he made me what i was he made love from the purest stage of my life to the darkest i have learned love is pain misery heartbreak |
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19 years ago
by katie
thank you so very much i love how you put that it is so true but every time i start rebuilding again He comes back along helps me but when we're putting in the block that keeps it all together he leaves me holding it but it just so hard to hold it by myself and eventually dropps till where im back to where i started alone in so much pain but again thank you you are so very kind and sweet also if have a screen name isant message me sometime at silentlyxbroken1 but be careful you might just get my sister just ask for katie
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19 years ago
by Kane Burden
love is not always painfull
but i know it can be, but when you get it right, it can be so perfect!!!! love is a game, sometimes you win, sometimes you loose, but all there is to do, is play the game.. I know how it feels though, "your heart is a construction site, and your partner is the building bricks", and when the bricks are removed, you whole life comes crashing down.. great poem though, keep up the good work! best regards, kane
