by Victoria Jun 2, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Coming into a world of ups and downs |
Wow, this is so true. Brilliant. |
by Marjan
hey, I loved this poem victoria. |
by Becky drake
I liked the rhyming also, it was a very sad poem, if you read between the lines, someone, has been really hurt...but there is Grace, by our Hevenly father....I'm going to read a few more of yours, I'll let you know what I think, if you could please do the same, I'd be honored...thanks love ya becky |
by Andy Dude
man u have lots of long poems......that good......i like this one too......write more |
Hehe awesome poem my friend! The rhyming is really good and its just an amazing poem! Excellent work! |