by Poetic Tragedy08 Jun 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Why do you look |
by Vegetable
This is so sad, and full of emotion. At some parts the flow becomes a little awkward like here: |
by amelia
nice work man !! keep it up !! |
by Rolo
I felt the emotion, for sure. The rhyming and flow could have been better, but the words and emotions made up for it. Nice job. |
by Marjan
hey, this one's really a great poem. |
she did read it and she liked it! but she didnt have to go! thanks god! |