that was good! = ) *KISSES*~COrrie

For such a grim subject, I think you pulled it off well. Great job. 5/5

~rolo

wow i loved that poem!!!!

Amazing. Really good you wrote it brilliantly. Stunning emotion. Plz comment and vote on some of mine xx

Wow that was so awsome so little words you i saw the picture so clearly

another great one! 5/5
~Christina

Great poem so much emotion, you took a subject and excelled it. keep writting.

~liz~