I didnt really get this one too much, but I tend not to understand the "deep"poems like this, so maybe its just my blondeness? lol! *KISSES*~Corrie

That was such a good poem! 5/5!

So vivid i could see it all another great poem

I liked the way one line was lng and one was short, it gave me the idea of someone elese saying the short line more deep.

The flow was pretty good and i did enjoy reading it, mainly because of the line thing I really liked it =]

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