Facing Lies

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 2, 2005


*I edited the title, it used to be Lies of Truth, but I changed it for another poem*

When we went out
You never gave reason to mistrust
Now you're gone
That's all gone and dust
Lie by lie
Told to my damn face
Your losing my trust
Your losing this case
Leave me here with your lies
Leave me alone to die
Leave me here to leave
Leave me alone to cry
My last effort of holding on
Slips past my fingers
Your last effort of coming back
No longer lingers
I still love you to death
But you have a new date
Maybe this is it
This is my fate
Tip my hat
Open my eyes
To a new world
Where everyone dies

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good! 5 stars for this one.. Please check out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" it would mean a lot to me.. hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by Shy

    ummm...ok 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    I agree with geena, that was the best part..

    As for the rest of the poem, it is not your best...yet once again you manage to express your feelings through your words, and that makes me really enjoy the poem...

    Good job

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Very deep, much better than the previous one I just read, you have very good writing methods in my opinion......

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie McCullick

    This is a good poem. I really liked it.