Truth bearers of humanity

by guyute   Jun 2, 2005


Golden rules of our age
some are written in stone
the peaceful cheiftain burning sage
into the darkness walks alone
a social relapse into native mind
and a path to nature by the moon is shown
where the bear and the wolf are kind
and a warrior's courage is sweet home grown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    your work plays alot on what you already know but you forget your reader is some what dense to where your comming from. I think if you spent more time thinking how would a total stranger know what I am saying instead of what you know your work would be more easy to understand. I know your writing on a high level, but saddly most people are not that open minded. I hope you understand. Read Set Free and Never-Ending Gift you will see how every word has a concrete purpose and is easy to understand.

  • 19 years ago

    by otto

    you write very very well, I knew the concept of the poem but could really get it well written though

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Once again, great poem...Like the other I read of you, it is short, but this one has a more usual rhyming scheme, and the flow is easier to catch...

    In fact, this is a really good poem..I will never be able to write so good poems with so few words...

    I think I'm adding you to my fav`s

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    thats awesome! great poem!! 5/5!

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