Wow. u have a great talent for writing. i love it! keep up the great work!

gud poem.. i admire ur choice of words.. i lyk ur title.. the only thing i gotta comment on is the last 2 words.. "lust still" it kinda has a hard pronounciation.. but i dont think thats a big problem..
uve done gr8.. keep it up
nouna
thnx bunches 4 ur comment.. meant a lot