by Corrie Jun 2, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Your hand found mine, our fingers intertwined. |
by Sarah Ann
That was so emotional. I loved it. xxx |
by Bredada
THEY SAY THE THIRD IS A CHARM ONCE A PLAYA ALWAYS A PLAYA RETURNING TO HIS ARMS IS LETTIN HIM HE CAN LEAVE YOU WHENEVA HE PLEASES N HAVE U BACK WHEN EVA HE PLEASES PLEASE DONT FALL FOR HIM IVE BEEN THROUGH THIS BEFORE IS PAINFUL LUST NOT LOVE |
by Corrie
Thanx Nici! for all your comments, I appreciate them! and no that was a typo.. lol, but i fixed it! : ) and you had a good point about my other poem, "the man you dreamed up foe me" I changed that too, honestly i've never written before so i dont even know what a stanza is! lol! but thanx again! *KISSES*~Corrie |
by Nici
This poem was filled with emotion and I would imagine was hard to put down in words. Put you have managed it really well! |