That was really sad. It is a good poem. Well done!!!

This is a fantatsic poem! Good ending 5/5

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

It's a great one!! really touching!

This story is so sad but is one that realli kept my attention...i loved it

This is crazy good.

Wow that was amasing sad and lovely just lovely is all i can think to say keep it up!!

*anna*

This is the second time ive read this poem, the first i had just started and hadnt quite figured it all out. it still touched me and has found its way onto my fav list. you wrote about such a meaningful topic and even added a little twist. it truly is an amazing poem and i congratulate you. you are a very talented writer! keep it up :)

This is an amazing poem. I got tears in my eyes...its so sad.Great poem! It touched me.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
That was sooooooo sad!!!!!!
I seriously had tears in my eyes!!!!!
They were about to fall out but my mom is on the opposite side of the room, so I tried to hold it in!
Keep up the good work!!!!!

An excellent micro-shot of life and a reminder to all of us to beware the green eyed monster!
Well Done! Neil.

This poem made me cry. i love this poem. it shows that he was truly in love.

~love~

That made my teardrops run down my face, it was so so sad. . . awfully sad yet great! T_T

*tear* oh...my.. god.. this is such a wonderful poem. The flow was utterly amazing, the rhyming was great, the message was awesome. I loved it from begining to end.. oh and by the way, thanks for making me cry in my Studyhall.. lol jkjk.. i don't cry very often from poems, *actually i think that this may have been my first time.. lol* but this is a very moving piece. I love it! You did such a wonderful job putting all of this feeling and emotion onto paper. I cannot get over how wonderful this poem is! I really love it.. keep up the great work :]

Omg that is the greatest poem ever!! i actually teared up! so sad!!!! i love it!!! keep writing!
alwayz sunny,
shanna

This poem is very very good I enjoyed reading it, even though it made me sad. Keep up the good work!!!

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

I love this poem. and alot of others that you wrote..

Wow that is a really good poem!! so much emotion i almost cried great work! never stop

*annak*

This is very good work i love it ! wow