This is very good, nice job!

Good job...loved the way the poem is written...ur such an amazing writer...keep writing and posting and I'll continue reading them 5 from me

That Was A Great Work Of Art.
It Brought Tears To My Eyes </3
Good Work Keep It Up.

I just wanted to thank everyone :) , its def. my fav poem ive written...still makes me sad when i read it, and i wrote it! :P ..and to all the people stealing it, modifying it , and adding it to your pages to take credit for it, u suck monkey sperm!

That was so sad and it almost made me cry. but it does show that sometimes life isnt perfect and i think you showed that very nicely. i would like to see more on that story, but it would be kind of hard to do. i'm definetly going to vote five.

Omfg that was so sad. it was definately one of my fav poems EVER! not just on this site :D you are a GREAT writer NEVER stop :)

OMG. That is so good!

'it said "you take care of mommy
like she took care of me
and say that even though her hair fell out
she still looks pretty
give her an extra hug
and an extra kiss'

That's my favorite part, because it makes me think of my boyfriend's little girl and how she calls me Mommy. Very, very good. 5/5

I FELT EVERYTHING

Wow i actually teared up... just amazing

Wow! that was an excellent poem...that poem has me in tears...good job!

Wow very good i loved the twists in it very emotional to 5/5<33

Wow this poem is deep real deep and sadi cry everytime i read it.

This poem brought tears to my eyes. I've read your other poems...very amazing! The emotion filled words that you've wrote,just so emotional. I can feel the pain in the words.
Keep it up! Im sorry If this has come from your own experiance, but honestly i can say, i've been there. 5/5
xXx_Arielle_xXx

I love it. man i was so good that my dad asked what was wrong when i started to cry. man i love this poem so much. thank oyu for writing it.

That mad me totally cry
im completly serious
that is so freakin good!!!
Amber

This is Poem was really sad but it mean soo much.

OMGGGGGGGGG!
This was so good!!!!!
My nose is red from crying!!!!!!
Keep up the great work!!!!!!
5/5

That was absolutely amazing. 5/5

Omfg.
that was incredible. i honestly cannot describe how amazing that was. seriously. fantastic work!!!!!

THE most touching poem i've read.