Comments : The last message parts I , II & III

  • 16 years ago

    by Patricia

    That was a a great poem, it was really sad..i liked it..great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by WithYouForeverAndAlways

    This is one of the best poems that I have ever read. I can't describe it. It's amazing. Keep up the amazing work!!

  • 15 years ago

    by M00TM00T

    LOVE THIS POEM.....O SO CREATIVE! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Libby

    Woah, this poem is one of my favourite poems. This is really well written with a fantastic flow :)
    Great Job! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    The only poem that has made me cry ...
    it was so touching, so sad, so amazing.

    i liked how each part of the poem was from a letter from a different person, you pieced it together really well, and i still cant believe i cried... it was really touching. ive never cried while reading something before, your poem was the first. it was perfect!

  • 13 years ago

    by Shamia

    WOW!!! I'm crying!! This poem is the best I've read thus far!!!! I loved the pace, the story, it wasn't drawn out & yet it was so heartfelt and straight to the point....written beautifully!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was the first poem i've read on here and i loved it from the start. It's really creative and very touching. Being so well written makes reading it a pure enjoyment. Thanks for sharing! =]

  • 12 years ago

    by broken sword

    Realy its t0o go0d. .it maked me cry. .very nice

  • 12 years ago

    by micheritree

    Great. touching and artistic.

  • 12 years ago

    by micheritree

    It was great. touching and artistic.

  • 12 years ago

    by ami

    Best poem I ever read
    Really loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by ami

    Best poem I ever read
    Really loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Leanne

    AWWWWWWWW
    Part III was just... awwwwwww

  • 12 years ago

    by Leanne

    AWWWWWWWW
    Part III was just... awwwwwww

  • 12 years ago

    by Naiomeeh

    Wow...!!!totally speechless....

  • 12 years ago

    by Scarlet Letter

    Wow that brought me to tears. Thankyou. I never cry

  • 11 years ago

    by Confused Queen

    That almost brought me to tears! That was a beautiful poem!
    Great job!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    ........those dots....and those represent my awe with this poem...beautifully sad....

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    It hit my heart <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Mary Daphne

    5/5 great work. i couldn't find any word to describe it. i just cried right after reading the poem. it hit me so hard. excellent, excellent.