Comments : R.I.P

  • 19 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    5/5 Sorry about your friend. This is a very good poem and I'm sure he would like it if he was still here. But he isn't ever really gone though becuase he will always be in your heart and the hearts of everyone else who knew him and loved him.

    Keep your head up high,
    Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by *Emmy*

    Hey ok.. this is the last one im gonna read of urs, becasue u have alot.. so... i realy like it! tho! ur poems rele are great!! they rele mean lots to me!!
    xxxx
    emmy

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Such a haunting and mournful piece, so very sad. Good wrok.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by husbandlover

    Dude this poem is great.i started crying.i've had alot of friends die too.5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    ...it's so sad...and it's a great lost to lose someone so great like your friend...anyway nice poem and i see god has answered my prayer...larochelle misses you so much...you know...i can see why...you are a great girl...why don't you go check out the poems i wrote and please comment...i would like to know what you think...thanks...i really appreciate your time...

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    This poem made me feel sad and reminded me of the loved ones i lost..
    keep it up tho i love to read yur poems
    !!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic poem soz for your loss sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    This poem made me cry even though I didn't know the person. You put so much emotion into to this poem and you can really tell it. It also reminded me of my friend who died a weak ago. He was swimming and got swept over a damm, got caught in the current and drowned. so great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassie

    Omg i love it.. i can totally realte ! my friend Amanda was murdered in 2004 and it was soo hard to take at first it seemed surreal ... and even two years later its still hard .. she just turned 13 at the time if she was still here shed be 15 ...im soovery truley sorrY!

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    I'm so sorry about your friend. This poem was awesome. I loved it.

    5/5
    -Allanah

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgia

    Im sorry for your loss i dont know wat else i can say im sure u dont want me 2 say more except it was such a good poem and made me cry
    xoxoxox
    ove georgia

  • 17 years ago

    by Brian

    I would have too say just from reading that poem i had cried half way through it my mate had died in a bus crash so i know how it feels

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent poem, keep writing x x x x take kare x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    Im sorry you have had so much pain and loss in your life you im sorry you you prob dont want more friends i cant say i understand but if you want to talk or vent you can talk anythime xoxooxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by raeven

    Im srry about him i have had some of my best friend takin too 5 accually

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Thats Absolutly Fantastic.
    Beautifully written, straight from the heart.
    About a year ago, my best friend was also taken from me, due to drink drivers. I have made poems about him too. His name was also Matt.

    God must have needed Some good angels to take them away!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Farther From Here

    I'm sorry for your loss, but everyone has them right. I'm sorry if I could only show empathy for I have never lost someone dear to me, and curse the day when it'll come, so now I hope you're feeling better.

    I know what its like when losing a friend.

    Great job on the poem! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Shay

    This is a really great poem, and I'm so sorry about you're friend.