by Becky drake Jun 3, 2005
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
First of all since I'm still a little new here, I got into my box of works, and this was the first one I found. I wrote it on that Fateful day September 11,2001. Please read and vote, tell me what you think. Its a little outdated, but then again Not Really. |
by Marjan
I liked the flow. really good job becky. |
by Victoria
Great poem and I dont think anyone will ever forget that day the power in this write was good and brought out a patriotic feeling keep it up! |
by Gemma Sinead Hayward
Would you say freedom fighters are cowards? After all, our terrorists are their freedom fighters. If you fought for your country, does that make you a coward? If you fight for freedom, are you guilty of cowardice? |
yes the poem hit the mark with patriotic passion and a faith that one nation under GOD will survive while expressing our love and sympathy for the victims... good job..another 5 |
by Treakle
Such a good poem, |