I've lost my control

by Treakle   Jun 3, 2005


Maybe I'll not eat today,
Then all of this will fade away,
I'll concentrate so hard on food
That you cannot affect my mood.
My baggy jumper will conceal
The ways in which I really feel.
And if I know i have control
There is small hope for my soul.
I'll feel that i have changed something,
If I become so weak and thin,
That fainting feels likely as I walk.
I know what people say as they talk,
What is she doing? That stupid youth,
For they will never know the truth.
It's my control that I have lost
And you have taken away the most.
And constantly shall I weep,
To have it back
From you,
You creep

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eden

    Wow, this is a really good poem. Thank you for your comment on my poem. I really appreciate it, and I am flattered. Thanks again, this was a great poem. Tata

    Eden

  • 19 years ago

    by Alissa

    great meaning I went through that Im almost recovered but great words loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    first of all let me tell you, you do have control, you are in so much control that you don't even realize it......you control your thoughts, and you control who you will be, and how much better you will be, not that creep, or any other creep.....JUST Believe in yourself, you don't have to do the food thing, you are in control. so control, and tell anyone who tries to hurt you, 'CONTROL THIS", and walk away.....you are in control......you are also in control of being a great writer, write and write , and write some more, just please don't hurt yourself. With writing you release the negative with words, and the only thing that gets hurt, is your fingers, or writers cramp........be positive, the world is your paper, and your thoughts are your pen.......great poem keep writing love ya Becky

  • 19 years ago

    by Anna

    he he, forgot to put that I rated it 5/5!
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Anna

    great poem, I can totally relate to that, although like in my poem you read I sometimes think there are more factors to my not eating that control, for me it is also about losing weight, or maybe its about controlling my weight....... anyways!!!
    great poem, I wish I could have expressed myself as well as you
    love anna
    x

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