The wise, old man

Hi Line,
most touching, yet I must say at 14 finding the one you will love 4 ever is quite a fine...

I've known people that have not found their soul mates their whole life time. :).

Take your time, get schooled, you will be wise like the old man...

You have many years ahead of you, give life what is owed, educate it, love it, appreciate it, share it and grow with it... and the one you love so dear will love you for who you are not for your youth.......

As we get older our physical change and so do our minds( good and bad).(smiling)... COntinue to write great love poems... Have a blast...

Aww, how sweet! :). this poem reminds me of Jeremy...hey is ur name really line? if so, tha's a cool thing to be named. 5/5

Very good writing....I like your words

Okay it was a good poem sometimes it seemed a little rough to read

The wise old man said,
I would feel so good,
And he said if I meet happinness,
embrace it, I should.

like the really long line and then really short was kinda touch to read

good poem, cool idea, good job keep it up 4/5

heyy thanks for the comment i loved this poem he very wise man he is.. great job writting it gave you a 5..