Outstanding! How romantic. *sigh*

Great poem!

You really have a touch with love poems. Yours are pretty good, not too over the top and not too cliche.

nice

Like this poem the most of yours so far!

Wholeheartedly, you have, captured me
Your Siren song, resounds, with such rhapsody.

this part was epic, infact the rest of the poem
from the above part on was really really good.

Oh, what magic you engender.
To you and your love, I do, surrender.
Me, you, utterly, beguile.
I'm wowed, by your wonder and wrapped, in your wile.

just the rhyming and flow were perfect here,
the words you use int he whole poem were very strong, and would definetly melt a woman heart.

Excellent job