A Fallen Angel

by April   Jun 3, 2005


Fallen angel with broken wings.
Of pain and sorrow she often sings.
The grace of love no longer heard.
The siren's burdened lonely word.
She sings her songs of broken dreams.
A shattered spirit that's left unseen.
Her halo's tarnished and all is gone.
When the heart that's broken feels her song.
Praying for forgiveness wishing for a soul.
A last chance for the love within to heal and make her whole.
The past still haunts her wounds inside.
The chains that keep her heart subside
The truth is far from in her grasp
The more she digs into her past.
Trying hard to just forget.
The pain of uncontrolled regret.

Please comment and let me know what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    I'll tell you what i think. . . . .I think this poem is tormentingly beautiful. It hurt me to read something so beauitul. I love how broken this angel is and how remorseful she is. It shows that she still has a love for more than herself. Amazing capture. You're really talented. As i've told many before imagery is a very very hard thing to accomplish and tame but once you get it you have it and its great. You have it. Don't loose it.
    Thanks :)
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by ctmskm

    I liked this poem, Very good. it sounded kinda like one of mine there at the beginning. Keep up the good work.. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    IT WAS ... .... *gasp*
    *deep breath*
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    AWESOME,GREAT,WONDERFUL,MAGICAL,TRUTHFUL,THOUGHTFUL,HELPFUL AND UNDERSTANDABLE!

    TREMENDOUSLY BEAUTIFUL WORK.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    this is sad, dark, beautiful all at once. kinda like my poems.. but not as well versed lol. not yet anyways.

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    wow. amazing. its so sweet, so sad.. and so great.
    thnkx for the comment - im guna look at more of your stuff xxx

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