Yeah your absolutely right, will change that error, thanks for pointing it out.

Wow!!! that was excellent! I can't remember the last time I read a poem that gripped my attention as much as this one had. Everything about it was flawless...you did an excellent job in stunning me. xxx

i'll be honest with you. at first, when i saw your poem, i thought it was too long. as i read through the first few lines, i got hooked, so i read to the end, and i thought that your poem was too short. i really enjoyed reading your poem. somehow, it reminded me of my ex-bf. =) what an interesting sad story. well, i gtg, i hope u'll have a wonderful day. take care! *sMiLe*

i'll be honest with you. at first, when i saw your poem, i thought it was too long. as i read through the first few lines, i got hooked, so i read to the end, and i thought that your poem was too short. i really enjoyed reading your poem. somehow, it reminded me of my ex-bf. =) what an interesting sad story. well, i gtg, i hope u'll have a wonderful day. take care! *sMiLe*