Honestly, I don't care for the cutting stuff but this is a great poem.

exellent poem, just how i'm feeling well don! xxx

I understand how you're feeling, but I don't think a poem like this is very nice for people to read. It makes you sound proud of cutting, which I hope isn't the case. You should be careful in the way you express how you feel in poetry. It could really offend someone. If you need to talk, I'm here for you hun, but this poem is really sad :(

Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

If you can't take criticism, don't write. I was merely stating how it came across to me, so don't start getting all defensive. I wasn't getting at you, I posted my alst comment in an understanding manner, which you seem to have completely contrasted and just gone at me for no apparent reason. And for your information, the people who generally are most depressed, don't talk about suicide etc as bluntly as you so clearly have. Most are clever enough to manipulate words and feelings. You clearly need to grow up.

Thankyou.

Ugh I hate cuts, especially paper cuts, this poem gives me goosebumps, well written anyhow.

thats an awesome poem
keep it up!!
thx for your comment in mine!
luv
take care
Mel

i think this is great. if this isn't how you are feeling then i think you are amazingly understanding. It's really hard to write about stuff you're not really experiencing so this is great. I have no idea where 'Ironic Allure' is coming from. keep it up
Polly ~X~

That is a good poem, whether or not it is true. I really like it, whether because I once was a cutter or know true pain.But I still like it. Great Job!

~Ghosty

Cutting is stupid and not worth it, but yeah i once done it to, i believe that people out there that actually do it have guts, i mean that ones that actually kill them selves,. ohhh what the hell am i on about i dont no, im out of it. any ways it was kinda yucky i dont no why,
xox bam 5/5

Very creative, and heartfelt!

hm yeah. im kinda confused with ur poem :S
ny way, it was good.... but for almost the wrong reason. ok i dont no wat im saying. well done ny way nd thnkx 4 the comment. im guna check out some more of ur stuff

very good writing for you not to be a real cutter.........

what makes this poem so great is your use of repeatition of the line Im a cut, cut, cutter, it emphasives those words. I just like that, and I also like your steady rhythm and rhyme. 5/5 and thanx for commenting on mine. I can actually relate to this one because Ive also been a cut cut cutter at one point. but yea thanx again.

hey great poem, well written and very effective! 5/5 thnx 4 commenting on myn :)

love mark xxx

This a really good write, You did an amazing job keep it 5/5 much luv

~Nikki~

gr8 peom keep up da good work :)

I can see what Ironic Allure is talking about, even if you didn't attened for it to sound like your proud it kind of does, and you should be careful with the message that may send to someone. And by the sounds of it , it sounds like you weren't to happy with what Ironic Allure said, but again you need to be prepaired for critics, thats something that will always come your way when you make your work public like this. you did a good job writing this poem, you don't have to relate to a poem i relate to only about 5 of mine.

~thanks for the comment, keep on writing.

~PLP~ lil slam~

This is also a good poem. Thank you for commmenting on mine. I like your poems they all seem really good!

I loved this poem....you got straight to the point about cutting. Even though you said you don't do it, this poem showed a lot of emotion. And you shouldn't worry about those people that don't like your poetry....cause your good at what you do. Keep up the good work.....
*-*-*
LuV AlWaYz*
~lSlIlElRlRlAl~

This poem was so sad, I know people that do cut, and my heart goes out to them. Your very talented. Keep up the great work! xX Stay Strong Xx