by AKA
thats heaps good my bestie is a cutter but shes stoped now n uve wrote it preaty well |
by Broke&Lost
I like this poem. THanks for commenting on my poem. You're a talented poet too. I'm glad that this poem isn't true...so many now days cut... |
Ur poem was AMAZING!!! u are a very talented writer.. If this isnt happenin to u then u are very understanable and resonable...Keep writting u are very talented.. Dont let anyone turn u away from writting. ur an amazing writer. muwaz..Kim.. |
by Ladida
I'm a cut, cut, cutter |
I love this poem. its so good. while i was reading it i thought it was a true story untill i saw the thing at the bottum saying it wasn't a true story. |
by cLumsy
Thanks to god. i thought it was a true story. i was very moved by this poem! keep up the good work. and thanks for commenting on one of my poems! ;D 5/5 |
by k i k i
Thanks for the comment ;) |
by Ariana
It does sound like your 'proud' of cutting but I don't actually see anything wrong with this, I think it's just another, hopefully temporary, perspective. I quite liked how you showed this idea, the repetition of 'I'm a cut, cut, cutter' almost gives it a comical spin, which actually works at showing how serious a habit it is. I also liked the line 'and it's the blade thats keeping me alive' it works well and it is a good finish to the poem. Nice stuff. |
by nadsyy
Awww sad peom...but gwd job...love dia mwaz xoxo |
by no
O I love this poem..Sadly enough that is exactly how I feel when I cut..Very well done 5/5 for sure... |
Excellent , i mean words cannot express the flow of your emotion the picture created by your words.Simply superb. |