It's Sad

by Emma   Jun 4, 2005


6-2-05

It’s so sad
How so many people
Have came into
My life
For a couple of months
And then they were gone

It’s sad
How I see people
That I once thought
Were my friends
And now I feel
I don’t even know them
Because of how I ignored them

It’s sad
That I haven’t found a friend
Who’s willing to lend me
Some of their time
When I have a problem
And can’t find my way

It’s sad
That everyone I’ve trusted
Has done me wrong
I’ve waited so long
Just have someone
To hold on to
It’s just so sad

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  • 19 years ago

    by Laurence Hill

    You write from the heart girl.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    I like the way you admit that you're to blame as much as others. If you concentrate on this aspect and continue exploring your honesty things can only improve.

    Composition is strong though you could be more expressive with your choice of words. Still, plenty of time to play with words later... best to get the emotion conveyed properly first and you have done that.

    Good effort.

    B.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kisa

    I like how you wrote this one. It's like you felt the things I felt before. I felt like people backstabbed me but now I try to forget because I found new friends that aren't replaceable.

  • 19 years ago

    by Fierce

    I can relate to you so much! Good Job on this poem! It is sad how people just backstab you when you try so hard to please them! Keep it up..5/5 for me!
    Love Sarah

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