I can relate to you so much! Good Job on this poem! It is sad how people just backstab you when you try so hard to please them! Keep it up..5/5 for me!
Love Sarah

I like how you wrote this one. It's like you felt the things I felt before. I felt like people backstabbed me but now I try to forget because I found new friends that aren't replaceable.

I like the way you admit that you're to blame as much as others. If you concentrate on this aspect and continue exploring your honesty things can only improve.

Composition is strong though you could be more expressive with your choice of words. Still, plenty of time to play with words later... best to get the emotion conveyed properly first and you have done that.

Good effort.

B.

You write from the heart girl.