Excellent poem. The flow was perfect and could envision the scences you created here. GREAT JOB!

awww! so great, you must be such a strong person, great poem.
i hope this helped in releasing your pain
love
sammi morris

that was a faultless poem it was soo well written and im sorry your dad treats you like this great job though

this is a great poem! dont ever let anyone put you down...you have lots of talent, no one can take that away from you! keep your head up high, and reach for your goals! keep up your geat work! take care. :)

Aww, i see your strength. Nice job, hun!

<3 Heather.

STAY STRONG!