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by ShadowedPhoenix Jun 4, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
Theres one last thing I need to say And then I swear I'll be on my way. I just needed this today One last thing I wanted to say! I've needed to do this before I can say goodbye, So I can finally breathe and not cry. I'll finally dry my eyes and be ok after all these lies! I do love you so much, I alway just thought it was lust But you were the first one I could trust, I never showed it, I pretended I wasn't fussed..... I'm happy you found true love in her A love that many view as pure. She was a broken hearts cure, and all this you found in her!!! But I wish you were still mine, like you were in that time. That our love was as beautiful as that rhyme without our feelings being mimed! That's all I needed to say, Now I finally have to walk away! I've done all I should do today, And that's all I wanted to say......
by tiffany
wow this was beautiful! great job! you should definitely have a higher rater than that! i give you a 5! return the favor, thanx!
by Danny
Another brilliant poem. I especially liked the lines "That's all I needed to say, Now I finally have to walk away"